Fascinating Hummingbird

by Abril Rodriguez Diaz age 10
(Irvine, California, USA)




Fascinating Hummingbird


Your wings are flashy, vivid, and colorful

Magnificent hues, stunning and beautiful

Long tongue used to drink nectar from flowers

You eat a massive amount of food each hour

You are beautiful, a miracle

Brilliant and magical

A brave little bird, you keep your home safe and well

Any enemy is chased away as far as I can tell

Unlike other birds you are extremely small

But size doesn’t matter; your tiny heart inside is like a special piece of gold

Your thin beak like a needle, sparkling in the sun

Drinking nectar from plentiful flowers, is better than a cinnamon bun

Quick as lightning those tiny wings flicker

Appearing to be still as stone





By Abril Rodriguez Diaz age 10





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Oct 31, 2014
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great piece of art
by: Anonymous

Abril, your poem is great, well written and very knowledgeable.
Congrats!

Sep 29, 2014
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awesome Abril!
by: Anonymous

Your poem is great!

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