Hummingbird Poem by Jay York

by Jay York, age 12
(Adel, GA, USA)




Hovering
Under a branch,
Moving swiftly
Minute by minute
Intensely searching for
Nectar
Gracefully
Beneath the sun
Inches tall with a
Ruby throat
Darting from flower to flower.

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Sep 28, 2012
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Wonderful description of Hummingbird
by: Ms. Marian Parish

Jay, I appreciate your descriptions and many talents of putting these words in print. Continue to seek and write and draw what your minds eye sees. Love it. Thanks, Jay.

Sep 24, 2012
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Jay's poem
by: Doris Mann

I can see this hummingbird in my mind's eye. The figurative language is very good. This poet really knows about hummingbirds!

Sep 23, 2012
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Good Poem!
by: Tim and Sonya

Jay,

Good word choices to portray the hummingbird and its never ending search for sweet nectar.

Sep 23, 2012
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Good Job !
by: Ms. Mary Sue

Jay, wonderful choice of words to describe the hummingbird. I love to watch the hummers come and feed in my back yard ! ! See you at church !

Sep 23, 2012
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Can Hummingbirds Fly Upside Down?
by: Anonymous

Jaybird... I loved your hummingbird poem. It is very sophisticated (look it up) like you. Every time I see my hummingbirds fly up and perch on a tiny bare limb, I think of you because you said you had never seen a hummingbird alit. Have you yet? You are a real Renaissance man (look it up) and I want to be like you when I grow up... Love GREAT Uncle Davy Keep reading and writing!!!

Sep 23, 2012
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Your The Best
by: Tony

Jay,

Very Nice Poem! May you continue to be blessed with all of your talents. Thank you, you are blessing each of us with all of your talents. Keep up the great work!

Sep 20, 2012
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Prose Pro
by: Anonymous

Minute by minute you amaze everyone. I had no idea you could write. Keep up the good work in all that you do.
Andy

Sep 19, 2012
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Fantastic job.
by: Anonymous

Excellent job Jay. Keep up the great work.

Sep 19, 2012
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hummingbird poem
by: Anonymous

Jay, great writing! I could picture the hummingbird that you were writing about. Keep up the good writing. Dianne

Sep 19, 2012
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Awesome Poem!
by: Nina

What talent you have...an artist and poet! Awesome poem.

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