My goodness, this is beautiful. I really love your poem. Keep writing sweety. Shows that you see everything around you and enjoy the gifts that god gave to share.
Love Grandpa
Aug 30, 2010 Rating
A bouquet of flowers to the poetNEW by: Grandma Carrol
Joslynn You truely have a Humming bird heart, you are always so busy and so creative. Humming birds spread their beauty and love around and like their little morning sprinkle just like you. I loved your poem.
Aug 30, 2010 Rating
Great Town!NEW by: Anonymous
Sounds like a wonderful place! Very good work.
Aug 28, 2010 Rating
Can I go?NEW by: Ashley Hatcher
Great poem! I would love to visit Hummingbird Town.
Aug 27, 2010 Rating
Liked the PoemNEW by: Anonymous
This was a nice poem. Hummingbirds are my favorite bird, and I'd love to see a hummingbird town!
JG
Aug 27, 2010 Rating
My Favorite Hummingbird TownNEW by: Anonymous
Joslynn,
I think we would all love to live there. It sounds like a wonderful place. Thanks for describing it to us. I will think of it every time I see a Hummingbird!
Aug 27, 2010 Rating
Morning shower sprinkleNEW by: Anonymous
My favorite part is the morning shower sprinkle. It sounds so descriptive and fun!
Great poem! Thanks for sharing it with us :-)
Julie Babcock
Aug 27, 2010 Rating
Fantastic!NEW by: Renee
Love the poem Joslynn! I would really love to see them play sword beaks! Great imagination!
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
Precious!NEW by: Aunt Bettie
Josyln, How special you are, to state your feelings so well! I enjoyed reading and knowing it came from one of my dear nieces!! G. Aunt Bettie
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
hummingbird townNEW by: Uncle Lloyd
What a great poem. You're a poet and didn't know it! I am proud of you! Keep up the good work Love Uncle Lloyd
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
Wonderful!NEW by: Aunt Karen
It was such a joy to read. It was sweet, genuine, and lovely to read. I hope Joslyn continues to write poems and stories. She's got a lot of imagination and she also notices the world around her in her own special way. What a delight this was.
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
Bird lfe in WingtonNEW by: LeRoy Reynolds
I to would love to live next to the humming bird town. They are busy folk, flying here and there with such speed and grace you might think they are jet airplanes. They are apart of the large city Wington described in the book "Bird Life in Wington" by John Calvin Reid, a book which is great fun to read and think about. I hope you continue to watch and write about the birds around you. Hummingbirds have much to teach about life.
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
Great PoemNEW by: Brother
Joslynn, I love your poem. You are the Greatest poet I've seen in my life. You are so creative and smart.
Love, your brother Jerry
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
I love hummingbird townNEW by: Aunt Mel
Joslynn that is so great I just love it. You did a very good job I am so proud of you. Keep up the good work. Love and miss you
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
Hummingbird Town is GreatNEW by: Anonymous
I like your concrete action and the pictures it plays in my head of the hummingbirds going about their hummingbird activities. Great job!
Marcia Sanders
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
OutstandingNEW by: Anonymous
Joslynn, This is very creative and nice. I think I would like to be in Hummingbird Town too.
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
Visit Humming Bird TownNEW by: Anonymous
Your poem made me want to visit Humming Bird Town :)! Great Poem! ;)
Aug 26, 2010 Rating
What a spot of sunshineNEW by: Anonymous
I love this poem. What a budding little poet. Your love of birds and imagination brings joy and sunshine to everyday. I am certain anyone reading this poem could envision the hummingbirds going about their day in their own little town.
