If i was a bird

by Megan
(United Kingdom)




If I was a bird

Someone once asked me a question,

If I was a bird what would I be?

I replied to them, I would be a humming bird you see

My wings would hum along every time I fly

I’m too fast even for the cat’s eye!

My wings would flap at least fifty times a second

I would be with you as soon as I was beckoned

I could fly frontwards backward and even upside down

My feathers would almost look as if I wear a colorful gown

I eat flower nectar because I’m not a very good packet reader

but nothing makes me happier then when I’m eating from my recycled bottle feeder!

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Jul 15, 2014
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Great read
by: Paddy

Excellent poem well structured and easy to read with a lovely rhyme scheme

Great use of hummingbird facts too well done megan

Jul 15, 2014
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Lovely!
by: Christian

I really like the structure! It reminds me of the classic books 'Fox in Socks' and 'Green Eggs And Ham'! i especially like the 3rd and 4th lines

Jul 15, 2014
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Fantastic
by: Corrie

This is a lovely poem full of imagination. I am very impressed.

Jul 15, 2014
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Great poem
by: Abbey

A great poem by megan very well written

Jul 15, 2014
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megans poem
by: keith

BRILIANT, ABSOLUTELY BRILIANT!!
I especially enjoyed the part where you commented on how a humming bird flies.

Jul 14, 2014
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great poen
by: steve

very good poem it was well written.Brilliant poem !

Jul 08, 2014
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I really enjoyed the poem !
by: Sue

I thoroughly enjoyed reading the poem. I thought it was very creative.It gave me lots of information on Humming birds and made me want to make a recycled bottle feeder myself to encourage the colourful bird into my garden!

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