If I was a hummingbird

by Remington Miller age 12
(Little Rock, Arkansas )



One day I thought in my little head,
What if I wasn't me?
What if I was, let’s say, a hummingbird?
Well that got me a thinking,
That got me a smiling,
I closed my eyes and imagined,
I shrank and grew a long pointed beak,
With wings and feathers, too!
Well with that at last I thought,
what would a little hummingbird does?
So, I got back to thinking,
That if I was a hummingbird
I would fly around a time or two,
In search of nectar,
Boy, it sure takes lots of power to
Power my swift wings up,
The clouds were my track,
And I was a racer,
Heart beating as I flew,
Doing flips and turns.
I opened my eyes and smiled to my self,
As if by magic a little hummingbird flew right by,
As if it was saying Hi.

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If I was a hummingbird

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Apr 04, 2012
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by: Grannie

Your poem was so much fun to read and brought a smile to me too. It let me close my eyes also & think about being a hummingbird and where all I might fly - across oceans, jungles, and neighborhoods, sure hope some kind folks will have the sugar water out for me, hee hee.

Apr 03, 2012
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Awesome!
by: Aunt BB

Your poem is wonderful, Remington!!

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