Isabelle's Ode to a Hummingbird

by Isabelle age 10
(villa hills, KY 41017)




Your song of pure beauty falls straight into my heart,
Do you know what a divine, blissful creature thou art?
Your beauty enchants me, makes happiness flow,
When around you I smile, you make flowers grow.
As you soar through the sky you are fast, you are free,
I see you a lot from my favorite tree.
So hummingbird, hummingbird as I stand by these flowers,
I hope when I'm quiet your peacefulness showers.

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Dec 30, 2012
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great
by: Anonymous

wow this is great

Sep 15, 2012
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excellent rhyme scheme & use of vocabulary

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