little red bird

by Patrick Murad 12
(jamesville new york united states )




See their beautiful tiny red wings beat as fast as can be.

when they go to get more flower necter.

feel their small soft fuzzy feathers.

hear the magnifcent song they sing.

smell the amazing scent of the outdoors that they live in.

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Sep 26, 2012
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Great poem!
by: Mr. Starowicz

My favorite line is "hear the magnifcent song they sing." Nice work!

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