My Mom A Hummingbird

by Ulysses Ekhator Age 8
(Fort Wayne, Indiana, U.S.A)


MY MOM A HUMMINGBIRD

My hummingbird mom
You are my sunshine
You are my protector
You look like a hummingbird
You smell like a flower
You shine like a rainbow

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My Mom A Hummingbird

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Jul 19, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		simply wonderful
by: Linda Adeoti

Although I got this rather late, Ulysses you are such a very brilliant writer. I feel you should be awarded a noble prize for literature-children category, if you continue writing beautifully.
Apr 08, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		A nice one!
by: M. Peters

wao! simple and really nice. Keep writing boy!
Apr 08, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		A peot in the making
by: Justina

Very nice poem Ulysses...a writer/poet on the making for sure.
Apr 05, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Uprising Poet
by: Joyce A.

A great poet in the making. Very well put together for his age. Keep up the good work Nephew, I am proud of you!
Apr 04, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		I like this
by: Andy

I like the poem. Great piece of work. Keep on writing boy.
Apr 04, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Amazing
by: Nosa

Simple yet poignant!.... yet just 8 years old1
Apr 02, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Very good
by: Anonymous

A nice way to describe one's mom. A real tribute to motherhood.
Apr 02, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Very poetic
by: Gerald

Nice, simple and to the point. Hope to read more inspiring poems from you soon.
Apr 02, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Profound
by: Anonymous

Simple, yet profound. The a few words that have said a thousand pictures.
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Poetic tribute to motherhood
by: Macdonald

A truly poetic exemplification of gratitude towards mothers. Thanks for extolling the value of motherhood.
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great!
by: Chinedu

great poem. keep it up
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		nice poem
by: Ellen

A nice tribute to mothers
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		very nice
by: Jonathan

Good poem. Simple and powerful. I like your use of word picture
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Awesome
by: Anonymous

Awesome. Inspiring.
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Loved the poem
by: Angela

What an up and coming poet. Such a simple poem with a powerful message. Just loved it.I hope you continue writing.
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Good Job
by: Michael E

Very good piece of poetry. Excellent job, Ulysses.
Apr 01, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Nice Poem
by: Anonymous

I like this poem very much. I like the rhyme and the message it conveys. Very nice poem.

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