Ruby-Throated Hummingbird (Haiku)

by Bentley age 11
(Woodruff, SC, USA)




A Hummingbird wings
Swiftly through the summer sky.
They are wonderful.

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Jun 10, 2012
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Wonderful Haiku
by: Anonymous

This is a great haiku! They are pretty difficult, but you pulled it off. It follows the correct structure, and it is a fantastic glimpse of a scene in nature.

May 21, 2012
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I love Haikus!
by: Anonymous

This is the coolest Haiku about hummingbirds!!!

May 16, 2012
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Awesome!
by: Anonymous

This haiku is totally AWESOME!!!

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