The hummer

by Makayla, age 9
(Fort Bragg, CA)




Humm humm here I come to hover and sip from flower to flower. Look at me shine when I'm up in the sky, away I fly so bye bye.

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Sep 23, 2014
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The Hummer
by: Anonymous

It's fantastic! It's very hummmmmy!

Sep 21, 2014
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Beautiful
by: Clare

Can see the little bird very good.

Sep 20, 2014
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Nice
by: Anonymous

You wrote a great poem. Keep up the good work.

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