The Hummingbird Poem by Clay York

by Clay York, age 8
(Adel, GA, USA)




Flying silently
With a map for nectar,
A small bird
Quickly goes past me.
I wonder if it ever
Stops flapping it's wings?

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Sep 27, 2012
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Hummingbirds
by: Marian

Clay, I enjoyed reading your poem very much. I love the little hummingbirds and keep a feeder for them. There is always a mean little one that wants all the sugan water. Keep up your writing and I look forward to your next poem. Your cousin Marian

Sep 24, 2012
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Clay's Poem
by: Doris Man

This poem makes me think of the hummingbirds I have at my house. It is very well written. I can tell the poet put a lot of thought into this poem.

Sep 23, 2012
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Good Poem!
by: Tim and Sonya

Clay,

I wonder that same question you asked in your poem. Does a hummingbird ever stop flapping its wings?

Sep 23, 2012
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Excellent
by: Ms. Mary Sue

Clay, I enjoyed reading your poem and it so aptly describes the hummingbird ! ! Keep the creative juices flowing. See you at church !

Sep 23, 2012
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I Want to Be A Hummingbird
by: Uncle Davy

Clay... Just after reading your great poem, I went out and sat on the deck. In just a moment, a hummingbird flew by and I immediately thought of you. Your poem makes me want to fly like a hummingbird! Wouldn't that me fantastic...to fly like a hummingbird? Keep writing... the more you read and write, the more you learn. I'm going to go make me some hummingbird wings with a lawn mower motor and blades and hook it to my back an fly over to your house and visit. Be looking for me... Love you... Uncle Davy

Sep 23, 2012
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Great Poem
by: Tony

Clay,

Continue to strive and develope all of your hidden talents. Thank you for sharing your Poem.

Sep 20, 2012
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5 Star Poet
by: Anonymous

Clay- You're a poet and I didn't even know it. Great Job.
Andy

Sep 19, 2012
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Great job.
by: Anonymous

Clay, that is a great job. Keep up the good work.

Sep 19, 2012
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the hummingbird poem
by: Anonymous

Clay, this is fantastic! Keep up the good writing. Dianne

Sep 19, 2012
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Love It!
by: Nina

Awesome! Your poem is very picturesque!

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