The Joyful Hummingbird

by Lyddie
(Pacific Northwest)




The hummer looks so beautiful-
He comes to my door
He flutters away,
Then swings and swoops for more.

The hum makes a rhythm
That's gentle as a bee
He joyfully buzzes;
He dances, for he's free.

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Nov 04, 2012
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The Joyful Hummingbird
by: Lucy


What a lovely little poem! There is so much imagery.Your words make pictures in my mind of that hummingbird "dancing" here and there.I hope you continue to write poetry.


Oct 23, 2012
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Fantastic!
by: Madison

Wow! I love your rhymes and lovely description of hummingbirds.

Sep 30, 2012
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Loving this!
by: Anonymous

Hi Lyddie--I love your beautiful poem and I also love hummingbirds. You are an excellent writer.

Sep 29, 2012
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Great job!
by: Gabriella

I love the rhythm, and the descriptive words you used!

Sep 29, 2012
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The Joyful Hummingbird
by: jeanne

You must see a lot of hummingbirds in your yard as your description fits them perfectly! I love your poem.....can't wait for another :) j

Sep 29, 2012
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Wow!
by: Matt Smith

This poem is very well written. I could envision the hummingbird flying around our backyard. Keep up the great work.

Sep 29, 2012
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nice descriptive words
by: Joyfulmomof6

I love the idea of the hummingbird dancing in the air!

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