Bright Feathers

by Andrew Lockwood age 9
(Papua New Guinea)





Bright feathers,

Long Beak,

Large flowers

He seeks.

Little as can be.

Working all day,

Flapping his wings

Without a delay.

Spreading pollen all around,

Not making much sound.

Piercing a flower,

With much power.

The smallest you will ever see.

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Sep 12, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Awesome!
by: Ardis Brown

Andrew, you did awesome in writing this beautiful poem of the hummingbird...my favorite smallest bird that feeds at my hummingbird feeder near my kitchen window every day.
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Well Done
by: Jody Hehn

Andrew, your poem was well written and I could visualize all the things you wrote about the hummingbird. They are one of my favorites to watch and your description in poetry was wonderful.
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great!
by: Anonymous

I loved how you were able to zero in on the characteristics of the humming bird.
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Bright Feathers poem
by: Anonymous

Very well done!
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great Poem
by: Anonymous

You did such a good job on this Andrew. It's a beautiful poem.
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		nice poem
by: Anonymous

Nice use of words, you get the ideas across without making the reader work too hard and it's enjoyable to read.
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Very nice
by: Nonna

I liked this poem very much Andrew
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Wonderful!
by: Anonymous

Wonderful!
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great job!
by: Anonymous

Wonderful work, I like the way you write!
Sep 11, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great job!
by: Anonymous

Wonderful work, I like the way you write!

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