Elias's Hummingbird Poem

by Elias Crislip
(Gilbert, AZ)




Fast, amazing
Flying, eating, buzzing
It makes me smile when it passes by!
Mystery bird

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Aug 09, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Amazing!:)
by: Tia

Elias you are such a super star!!!! I love you Mr. Poet!!!!
Aug 02, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Great job!
by: Anonymous

Love it, that little bird makes me smile too!
Aug 02, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		buzz buzz
by: Anonymous

We love your poem, Elias. Looking forward to reading many more, as soon as you write them!!
Jul 30, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Wow!
by: Dad

Very creative and wonderfully constructed!
Jul 30, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Well done Elias!
by: Mom and Dad

We love it!!
Jul 29, 2012
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starstarstarstarstar 		Love It
by: Grandma Nora

Great work Elias -- you're very descriptive!

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