Fly Along

by Max Schulman 11 years old
(Jamesville Dewitt Middle School Syracuse,NY)




Hearing noises all


Around


You, everywhere you look you


Will see happy hummingbirds humming as loud


As they


Can, while sipping up lots


And lots of delicious nectar


Watch as they gracefully fly


Away happily!

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Sep 26, 2012
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by: Mr. Starowicz

Your poem has vivid sensory details. Thanks for sharing!

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