The Iridescent Bird.......

by Libby (age 11)
(UK, Preston, Muchoole, Lancashire)




As the sunlight makes my colors bloom,
My iridescent feather wings flap back and forth,
In different angles.
I hover down to take a sip of nectar from the tubular flowers,
I don't hop or walk, i perch only,
And once more my wings are ready to fly again.
As i fly in a horizontal figure eight pattern,
I rise higher and higher,
I see the treetops swaying,
I make a call to say 'I am the Hummingbird!'

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Oct 22, 2014
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by: Carole

Very talented young lady!!
I hope you make 1st place for such a Beautiful poem xxx
Aug 29, 2014
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by: Anonymous

Beautiful words beautiful poem!
Aug 29, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Brilliant.
by: Anonymous

Very talented! X
Aug 29, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Awesome
by: Damian

Such a talent. A bright future ahead of this one
Aug 28, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Hummingbird
by: Anonymous

Very talented young lady. The future is bright for you.
Aug 28, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Brilliant Poem
by: Katie Campbell

Such a lovely poem to read, the words were beautiful and warming.
Aug 28, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Hummingbird
by: Anonymous

A beautiful and heartfelt poem, well done and good luck, you deserve to win x
Aug 28, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Hummingbird
by: Alma

Just wow! A child at 11 to be writing something like this, incredible. Excellent.
Aug 26, 2014
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by: Anonymous

beautiful
terrific
powerful
tear of joy
hope you succeed!
Aug 26, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by: Anonymous

What a poem! Well done! I found your poem very beautiful it brought a tear into my eye. I hope you win or at least come second or third, very well done!

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