Birds flashing like gems

by Sara age 11
(459 Hughes dr., Kingsley, Michigan 49649)




A jewel flits through the air
Bright colors clashing against the green leaves
Birds flashing like gems float around a flower
Darting in and out
Their bright colors; red, green, brown, yellow
swirl around the sky
As they hover sipping nectar
Against the blue, blue sky

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Sep 29, 2014
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starstarstarstarstar 		Very nice
by: Anonymous

This is a very nice poem with lots of descriptive language. I love how its around nature with nothing as human as a feeder.

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